I've only read the first chapter of this story but it's really well written. I commend the writer for good sentence structure and capturing the mindset of the slave in a realistic manner. Poor Murky How could anyone be so mean to such a cute little pony :C
I started reading this one entirely because of the shout-out on the PH hub page. I don't regret it at all. It deserves its own EQD page more than any other spinoff that didn't already have one than I've ever read, and this picture illustrates it perfectly.